Thursday, August 16, 2012

Three things I know to be true

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 Each person has at least three things about know to be true. Today, I'm going to explain the three things I know to be true. They are ; I love my family, I like Autumn, and I like traveling. There are many
things that are true to know. But today, I will talk these three that I want to tell you.


 First, I love my family. I'm thankful to my family who always think about me. They said after I came here GLPS, they miss me more and think me more. My families are father, mother, brother, sister, and me. Between kids, I'm the oldest and the one who misses my family so~ much. At free time, we see movie, go to the park which is near to our home, and travel too.


 Second, I like autumn. Autumn is between summer and winter, so it's not hot or cold. It's cool. Also, I'm happy to see the leaves which is colorful. It's fun to see red, orange, yellow, and brown leaves. It's also good to read because autumn makes us peaceful.

  Lastly, I like to travel. When we are traveling, we can eat many varieties of foods. Each place has each cultural or special food and we can try it. We can also see the many backgrounds too. At spring, we can see flowers, at summer we can see the ocean, at fall we can see leaves, and in winter we can see snow. Each time and seasons has different background, so it's interesting. Also we can talk and sing! We travel at weekend, and our family talk and sing. It's really fun!


 In conclusion, the three things I know to be true are that I love my family, I like autumn, and I like to travel. Next time, I will be with another topic.

2 comments:

  1. autumn is my favorite season too. Summer is too hot. especially this summer.. winter is too cold! But in autumn, the weather is just right to play outside, hang out with friends or travel with family.
    It seems like you love your family very much and they love you very much too! Sweet!

    Just one thing! You might like to add a few sentences to your conclusion paragraph. You could briefly summarize your three body paragraphs, each with a single sentence.
    Using a personal anecdote or explaining your personal experience in one of your body paragraphs would be an excellent additive to your writing!

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  2. This was posted very late. Next time, post assignments on time. Try to add pictures as well to your post. It was interesting to read.

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